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write place

  On last friday I want to write place again, actualy, this is not my first time to go to write place. Last semester is my first sememster at St.Cloud State University, so I took two ESL classes. We have to write lots of article for this two classes, the teacher often recommended us to modify our composition there. If this is your first time to go to write place, you have to go to our school's website, and then find write place online registration, so that the next time you want go to write place, you can make appointment online.
   I often go there to fix my grammar, because i have a lot of defects of grammar. They will go through ervey single sentences what I write and help me to correct the wrong sentences. On the other hand, my sentence structure sound the same way that will made reader feel so bored. The teacher on write place they told me repetition of a single and simple sentence patter draws attention to itself, not to the ideas in my paper. So after I went to write place,  I pay more attention on my sentence structure. I have a big
  I think this kind of method, have a great help to my paper. Ican find my details fault and correct it.

 

Topic

My presentation topic will be "how phrases function".
Because I want to improve the way my writing sounds.
All of my sentences sound the same. It would be helpful if I knew more about how phrases function so that I could vary my sentence structure.

Criterion

In my Group 1 we determined that our parameters should be as follows:
1) All 12 objects listed. (5 points)
2) Interest (4 points)
3) Organization/Structure (3 points)
4) Clarity (2 points)
5) Grammar/Spelling

The class as a whole determined that the class parameters would be:
1) Creative use of all 12 items (5 points)
2) Interest (4 points)
3) Organization/Structure (3 points)
4) Flow (2 points)
5) Grammar/Spelling (1 point)